Real good job man
coulda added a little base, this isnt really a song... pretty cool though
bass in drop and less scratchy noise
Im really against heavy sub basses but I'll think about it.
damn naturally talented ppl
well as u said they are unable to lie so per the previously stated rule they would be unable to say "I am Lying" unless they were laying down?, but this is pretty dirty. Wish I played music as a kid so maybe I could make good stuff now.
This is really good though, not my type of music, but good none the less.
slow start but sick
Thanks. If it wasn't sick, I dunno what it was.
Pretty well made
This sounds more like trance then just plain techno, anyway, the beginning transition to the main part is pretty lame and boring, everything sounds pretty good but a good drop start with the beginning like a ripple and then rises like a huge wave and then crashes with intensity and power, your song didnt really do that, it was a pretty boring transition. other wise, it sounds very well made, Id say its like a 7.5 around there with the boring drop... GL
This isn't the full track...
The song starts out great and has a really mysterious feeling to it but it seems to encounter some trouble when u add that kick.
The kick is to solid its to definit, it doesnt fit the unsenserity and mystery that the song has in the beging.
It's really just the fact that the song seems unpredictable and turbulant but then the kick comes in and makes the song predictable, if it didnt keep the same tempo then it might fit but otherwise it really breaks the song away from what it can truley be.
your song is good and has alot of potential but with the kick still in there it takes away from the songs quality
A softer Kick would improve the song, BUT, Me being too lazy to fix it, I dont think I will. If enough people say fix it though, I will.
The piece is good but I dont think it belongs in the the trance section, im hardley in a trance listening to it. makes me think of some jessica simpson song rofl. Its definitly good but not trance I dont think
I like much
I like the style of this song even though there doesnt seem to be much more then a straight path here and u just keep adding shit on. But regardless this is really interesting and has a good feel to it. GG
AH, but I add shit on in such a way to keep you interested, that's my point:D
I really liked this song, overall it was great and I loved what you had going on from 2:30 to the end. The beginning is good too, mabey a little repetitive, this might be why the rating was so low - cause ppl didnt listen till the end w/e. I wish the song had an end why is it that you cant end it or make it longer?? if theres a time limit, start a new file and mend them together later?? well I hope u finish this, good work I like! =)
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